My Drawings(I take requests if I'm happy)

I'm sure many of you have seen some of my pictures before, but maybe some of you haven't. Either way, now you'll get to see them.

I take cristsism very well, do feel free to shot away at'em. Also note that what you see is mostly just WIP stuff.

I like the second one best, I think. It has the best eyes/expression.

In the first drawing, the mouth is off proportions even for cartoon size. The mouth shouldn't use as many hard lines either. It's not only about lines, but suggestion of line; a few short strokes here and there in the shape of the lips with the opening still in the center would be better, in my opinion.

Now that I can see all your art in one place, it's easier to judge between them, but off of that subject for now.

I'm no artist, I will never claim to be, but I can say this, these all look really good. A few have a few things wrong with them, but those you all admitted to when you posted them over on the Sporum. Keep it up Jac.

Thank you all for your avice and critisim.

UPDATE: I replaced the creepy girl with the new one, and have added two new pictures.

These are really good! At least, better than what I can draw.

I can draw pretty well but only when I randomly find inspiration. I don't want to post my art on this forum yet cause I am still improving. One day soon though... you all will be forced to endure the horror which is... my drawing skills!